For anyone whose offer is not selling
Paste your offer. See why it is not selling.
You wrote it and it is not landing. The checker scores the five parts every offer needs, shows the two weakest points, and gives you the first fix. Free, and it runs in your browser.
Free score and first fix. Full report, a rewrite with templates, £9.
No account. Your text stays on your device until you choose to send it.
The free checker
Write or paste your offer. Read the five parts.
One offer, one reader. The checker wants: who it is for, what you do, the price, the result, the condition. English and Turkish both work.
0 characters (ideal: 60 to 300)
The checker is a fixed set of rules running in this page. Your text is not sent to our server, not logged and not stored while you test.
How it works
Three steps. The score is instant; the report is by email.
Paste the offer
The text as you would send it, English or Turkish. The checker reads it on your device, in the page itself.
Read the score and the first fix
Five parts, each green, amber or red, with the two weakest named and a concrete fix for each. Free, every time.
Ask for the full report, £9
The rewrite of your offer line by line, two stronger versions of the same offer, and 10 templates to copy, by email within one working day.
Price
Free to score. £9 to rewrite.
Free
£0
The checker, unlimited use.
- 0 to 10 score on the five parts
- Each part green, amber or red, with reasons
- The two weakest points, named, with the first fix
- A skeleton sentence built from your own pieces
- Style checks: length, first person, empty adjectives, jargon
Full report
£9 one offer, one report
Requested through the form; sent by email within one working day. If it does not show you why the offer was not landing, reply within 14 days and you get the £9 back.
What's in it
- A line by line rewrite of your offer, keeping your voice and your facts
- The weaknesses ranked, not just the two the checker shows
- Two alternative versions of the same offer, written for the reader you named
- 10 templates for common offers, to copy and fill in
- The five parts, worked on your text, with the reasoning written out
Not included
- A promise of sales or rankings; nobody can honestly sell you that
- A second offer or a second language version (each is its own report)
- A subscription or anything that renews; one report, one price
The terms, in plain words. The free checker scores the text you paste, in your browser. The £9 report is a one-off: you send the form, we reply by email with the report, and payment is agreed by reply (there is no online checkout on this page, by choice, until the flow proves itself). Wrong fit or not useful: 14 days, reply to the email, £9 back. Read the full terms.
Proof
The first 100 offer analyses will be published here, anonymised.
No analyses have been published yet. As real offers come through the checker, with the sender's permission, we publish the score, the two weakest parts and what changed. Names and identifying details are stripped; the analysis stays, the person does not. That includes the offers that never improved: a wall of wins would not tell you anything.
What is true today: the checker itself is public. Every rule it uses is in the page you are reading, so the tool is the claim, and you can test the tool right now against your own text.
- 0
- analyses published so far. The first 100 go up here, anonymised.
- 5
- parts scored, each 0 to 2: who, what, price, benefit, condition. Then four style checks with published penalties. Every rule is readable in the page.
- 2
- weakest points named, each with a concrete fix, on every free run.
Who makes it
Ultimate Vision Ltd, Gateshead.
Run by Hüseyin Bahar, an industrial engineer who has built companies in Istanbul and the UK and now lives in Gateshead. ultimateoffer.co.uk exists because of one line from his working notes: build the offer first, everything else second. It is also the tool his other sites use before they are allowed to launch: no page goes up without a sentence that names the reader, the job, the price, the result and the condition.
The free checker is deterministic JavaScript, no AI inside. The £9 report is written with AI assistance and edited by a person before it is sent. This page was written with AI and edited by a person. We say so because you should know what you are paying for.
Two lines from the founder's notes
"Önce sat, sonra üret."
"Sell first, build later."
Hüseyin Bahar, working notes. The offer is not a document about the business; it is the first test of it.
The offer is the hypothesis itself. Every claim a business makes begins as a sentence about a person, a job and a price, and that sentence can only be judged by being written down and shown to someone. The checker does the writing down; the market does the judging. That is why this tool comes first in the fleet and why it stays free: an offer that is never written clearly is never really tested.
The same doctrine runs the rest: one avatar, one offer, one call to action, at every one of the company's sites.
Questions
Five things people ask.
Where does my offer text go?
Nowhere, until you decide otherwise. The checker is JavaScript running in your own browser: the text is analysed on your device, and it is not sent to our server, not logged and not stored. The only thing our server ever receives is your email address, and only if you choose to send the report request form. The privacy notice spells this out under the privacy section of this site.
Is the score made by AI?
No. The free checker is a fixed set of rules in the page: it looks for reader words, an action verb, a price, a result with a time frame and a condition, plus length, first-person and jargon checks. The same text gets the same score every time, and you can read every rule in the page source. The £9 report is written with AI help and edited by a person before it is sent.
How long does the full report take?
Within one working day of your request. You send the form, we reply to your email with the rewritten report. If it will take longer for any reason, the email tells you why before you pay anything.
What if it is not useful?
Reply to the report email within 14 days and you get the £9 back, no argument. The free checker costs nothing either way, so the safe first move is always the same: run the score.
Does it work in other languages?
The checker reads English and Turkish, including full Turkish characters, and scores both with the same five parts. You can paste an offer in either language. The written report comes back in English.
The £9 full report
Send the offer, get the rewrite.
Tell us where to send it. Your offer text and score travel with the form only if you have already run the checker; you can send the form without them too. Reply within one working day; payment for the £9 is agreed in that reply.